Not trying to be a smart-aleck here, but maybe you shouldn't entirely trust your spell-checker to do all your editing. It is a "vial" of night, not a "vile" of night. Your poetry is very smooth though, and some of the imagery is quite pleasant.

I understand what you mean about being deprived of the freedom of flight as I also have been through the horiffic ordeal. I love your style, it's really expressive.

I am quite impressed with your writings and do hope that you write a great deal more. My three favorites were, Tell her she's pretty, For love and land, and Free hearts can't be caged. You are very talented and all your work should be credited, not just my three favorites. Have you ever published your work? I've seen much less talented people publish writings with much less quality than anything I have read of yours. If anyone says any mean comments about your wonderful writings, just remember that they are entitled to their opinions, and for everyone of those unappreciative people out there, I'm sure there are at the least 5 more who truly enjoy your writings. Until you have added another one of your famous writings I shall have to find a cure for my withdrawal symptoms. Congrats!

I agree with the previous commenter, you are a crafter of poems. Its obvious you spend a lot of time making them just right. They are beautiful! I really like the ones where you experiment with style such as "Loyalty" and "Silver". I hope you will continue to post more and update us!!!

I ADORE your poetry! my absolute favourite would have to be Free hearts cant be caged! i wish i had a talent like yours! your work is wonderfully inspiring keep up the marvelous work!

I ADORE you're poetry! my absolute favourite would have to be Free hearts cant be caged! i wish i had a talent like yours! your work is wonderfully inspiring keep up the marvelous work!

Simply beautiful.

You do beautiful work! I love your poem with the word 'silver' in every line, very inspiring!

My favorites had to be:

For Love and Land

Free Hearts Can't Be Caged

and

Wishes for Wings


I can't choose between them!
Once I began I wouldn't stop and come out of the world you had written, full of rhythm, until I was finished. They all left me with a sense of feeling. They inspired me to greater lengths at my own writing! Thank you for the wonderful reads!

My own words can't describe the beauty and magic of yours. I beg of you to write more.