| 7 Feb 2008 | Dave Cripps | Nice bit of graphite! Very lively. I get the feeling that the Nile has a lot to do with Egyptian stories of creation.  Shelz Keast replies: "Yup the Nile’s pretty important, without it there’d be no Egypt. The Nile deity is called Happy by the way." | |
| 7 Feb 2008 | Danko Ostojič | That doesn’t look as water at all.  Shelz Keast replies: "You’re kinda right." | |
| 7 Feb 2008 | Gabe Ender Davis | Wow. Very nice shading! Congrats on the mods!  Shelz Keast replies: "Thank you." | |
| 7 Feb 2008 | Gwenivere Stephan | Hm, very interesting. I didn’t know about the creation myths starting in a watery place... that’s interesting to me... but anyway... the water part of the picture could use some work, in my opinion. The "horizon" of the water is not clear and I was very confused about the ripples for a second. It almost looks as if the water is sticking like mud to the end of the ank and being lifted upward... do you see what I mean? It’s strange looking especially against the beauty of the heron. The heron IS very nicely done, very realistic and all.I love the way the snake is curled around it’s neck. With some work to the water and the ank this’d be a really fantastic picture. Nice work, keep it up! Congrats on the Mod’s!  Shelz Keast replies: "I agree the water isn’t perfect. Originally I was going to have some reeds in the background, but I was told not to have anything (not even the darkness) in the background by certain peoples. I got to compromise though. So the water’s horizon was meant to be higher up. There is mud/water clinging to the ankh, again that was in the initial design of the picture." | |
| 7 Feb 2008 | Gwenivere Stephan | Oh, one other thing I forgot! I love the Egyptian eye on the heron! Very neat and very subtle, great detail!  Shelz Keast replies: "Thanks, glad someone noticed the detail." | |
| 7 Feb 2008 | Katarina V. Baralić | It’s interesting...  Shelz Keast replies: "I know what you mean..." | |
| 16 Feb 2008 | Yasa Nihari | Cool! I love the shading, and the unwateriness of the waters of life. Why should they be normal? ^____^ | |
| 19 Mar 2008 | Stephanie S. K. Marbach | i really like the way the snake wraps itself around the bird’s neck. the shading looks good, too! my congrats for your star  !!!  Shelz Keast replies: "I used a couple of reference pictures to get the look of the snake right. " | |
| 25 Mar 2008 | Sam Adams | 0_0 Incredible! Awesome! Sooooo beautiful and mysterious! | |
| 11 May 2008 | Catherine Brodie | Beautifully drawn!!!  | |