| 9 Apr 2001 | Angel Tse H. Man | YAY!!!*first comment dance* I personally think this is very good, although there seems to be something wrong with her post...her shoulders are too narrow maybe? oh well, it might just be me... I can't wait to see the colored version!!Wouldn't be supprised, often have slight orientation problems with poses. Figures looking one direction and their bodies turned a bit diffrently. Ah well *g* | |
| 26 Dec 2001 | Cristina Angeles Ubay (Amberwing) | There is something off abou this... I think, it must be the right shoulder. It is too broad? Either that, or she has a very thin torso. It must be how you drew the curve of the breast. It could be better if the curve was steeper--nearer the shoulder. | |
| 11 Jan 2002 | Hettar7 | I think....Like no one's said that before.....That her neck and head are too far to the right side of her body. That's what's throwing it off. Nice job on the ears though, though they remind me of the ears from the record of lodoss wars. Nice job on the linework and shading, especially around the folds in the fabric and stuff. I like how it's in another color than just black, gives it a little more depth.Yeah. Hmmm. Or maybe that I didn't emphasize the right shoulder enough either.And thanks, also have been a big Lodoss fan in years past and am sure it grafted in somewhere. | |
| 29 Mar 2002 | Elf love | you are an amazing artest I hope your hard work pays off and I just might get this taTTOOED ON ME BUM!!!!!Ahahaha. That would be very scary. | |
| 19 May 2002 | Aisling Angel (Visitor) | Very nice pic.I to love the artwork of Brian Froud and can definatly see his influences in your work.I can also see the influences of "The Record of Lodoss War" as well as "The Dark Crystal"(Froud was the art/character designer for the movie).I have a few thoughts on what is making her seem a bit off. 1.Her neck seems to be slightly closer to one shoulder than the other. 2.The first thought might not be so noticeable if you outlined her other breast,because as of yet it only seems like she has one and it offsets her. Other than that it is a very beautiful piece and a very special one indeed. | |