| 29 Sep 1998 | Mir. | You got the anime mouth down, but whats with his hand? Is it just me or does it remind one of Michael Jackson? | |
| 15 Nov 1998 | Pong64 | This elf guy is in a very strange position! What exaclty is he doing, anyway!? Try to think about logical reasons for where your character's arms and legs are while you draw them. You don't normally see people standing around with one hand in their armpit, while cutting off their leg with their other hand. Or at least not where I live... | |
| 16 Dec 1998 | Daniel Routhier | More of a sketch, this could be a good start to re-do a final version of him. | |
| 23 Jul 1999 | Sword | Charcoal really hurts to work with as I well know. I
sugest maybe a recreation in pencil followed by a
scan and paint shop pro for colour. I think negatives
should be kept to the thinker, keep up the good work. | |
| 23 Jul 1999 | Lundar | Where do I begin? This work is terrible! It is smudged
to the point that it cannot be recognized. | |
| 19 Nov 1999 | Brian Keith Cooke | With that expression on his face, and the way he's holding his side, it looks like he's just been stabbed. Or at least smacked pretty good. He try some pick-pocketing and fail? | |
| 29 Dec 2001 | Anon. | I agree. This is really bad. Why don't you just give up, because you will never ever be any good, and nobody will ever be your friend, and your parents are sorry they had you and your dog is dead no matter what you heard and there is no Santa Claus and you make Baby Jesus cry because you are a horrible person and an awful artist. I hate you. | |