| 22 Nov 1998 |  Da' Artist | Actually now that I think of it they bottom half of the cloak could use a few improvements but I still am pleased at how the top half turned out.... | |
| 1 Dec 1998 | Curian ap Avalon | Hey Bryan, what you´ve achieved here is amazing ! I really love this picture. Her look is very natural this time !! Great job. | |
| 8 Dec 1998 |  Nancy (DRAGONSTARR) Pelfrey | Heya! This is quite an improvement! You did a wonderful job on the cloak and pants! Keep up the good work  | |
| 9 Dec 1998 | Da Artist | Really? I wasn't to crazy about how the pants turned out, the cloak I thought was great but the pants I thought could use some improvements, could just be the pose that is akward I guess. | |
| 4 Jan 1999 | Dwayne C. Hayes | You did a great job of the cape. A vast improvement. Overall the pic is quite good. Why is the sword so fuzzy though? | |
| 5 Jan 1999 | Da Artist | Well the sword was suppose to be this flaming sorta blade of energy but I guess I just didn't pull it off to well. | |
| 7 Mar 1999 | Girithelen | her heads to small, and the swords not right....other then that she's good | |
| 8 Mar 1999 | Jose (Gal. 3) | Isn't the cloak great?Hehehe!Thanks for mentioning me, and glad to be of help.About the picture itself,i like the face, it has something that attracts me.Also,the volume of the chest is very well done.Just one thing more;don't you think it's strange the head position? She has her chest raised,so the head may fall back a little... Bah,don't worry,and keep that way! | |
| 14 Mar 1999 | OVERMIND | I AM THE OVERMIND. I shall dictate whether this image is worthy of applause or not. IT ISN'T. Get a job. | |
| 22 Jun 1999 |  Lyndell Stout | Some people are such assfrigginholes. Nevermind him or rather it!!! The face on this sketch is perhaps your best so far. Although its not detailed it is proportioned. I would say that using the photo as a model helped. Please don't feel like that's against the rules or something. I used photommodels on 90% of my work and have for a very long time. The only way to draw real people is simply to draw them, rather from memory or from a reference the skills are all the same. | |
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