| 17 Sep 2000 | Moira | I think the limb proportions are a bit off, they seem too long, but I love the face, very detailed for just a few lines. | |
| 5 Nov 2000 | Sarah Ouderkirk | is she listening to music? put some headphones on and we can say that the fae world has been introduced to the internet! yeah! i like the ink smears. when i first saw them i thought they were blood, but she's kinda happy to be bleeding. 0.0 i usually make the ink smears on accident... damn pens... | |
| 20 Dec 2000 | Sarah | I agree (keep in mind that these are just my opinions) - Her limbs aren't in proportion. Her legs and feet are completely out of whack. Her forearms and hands are all right, though I think her fingers could use a tad more detail (not too much though, it would ruin the "simple" effect) but I think her upper arms are too skinny. I also think her torso is too long and it needs some shape. The leaves covering her could use a bit more detail.. They look transparent. I also think there should be a background - And maybe you could expand the top to show her hanging on to something? A tree branch, possibly?
I don't think she looks very happy - Calm, serene, peaceful.. All of those fit her, even though the smears look like she was just beaten up, or attacked by an animal (don't get me wrong, I like that!).
All of that aside though - I think this drawing has potential. I absolutely love her face! Her facial features are small and delicate like that of a small child. I'd honestly like to see another draft of this - I think you can do better.  | |
| 7 Jun 2001 | Cecelia <quacke | Hey, this is cool! It is simple and...dirty! lol, anyways, cool pic. Reminds me of... Me... | |
| 24 Oct 2002 | Will Stevens | Cool drawing. she looks very content  if you wantd to avoid the blotching, i hear you can get paper rollers that soak the extra stuff up. it looks cool though, like shes not afraid to get dirty | |