SciFi and Fantasy Art: Desinae

Once again, great job on the coloring, but her head is a wee, little bit too small, as well as the fact that her right leg does not seem to line up with her body. Great job otherwiseAck. Ok, going back to the pencil sketch... she's er... 11 heads tall, which is probably a little small although I like the effect overall. Thanks for pointing out the leg, I see where I made the mistake with it.

Great job on the overall anatomy, but I noticed there's a diagonal line on the abdomen that moves from lower left (for the viewer) to upper right; what is that for? There's no diagonal lines on the abdome, really, they're all curvy and generally go in a grid (sorta). Just pointing that out. Let's see some highlights on the clothing! Her head seems a little small in relation to the rest of the body, or is it just me? Remember the hand is as long as a person's face and can generally cover it completely. A way to reference. Anyone notice how Dark Elves from the Lodoss Wars wear very little? Take Pirotess in mind.. Yes, well, my constructive criticism is above. Great job otherwise, I love how you got the color of the skin just right and the antenea-like ears for that type of elf are done well. Thank you, I'll remember the bit about the hand. Her head is a bit small for her body.

OoooO! Pretty, but, ummm, I know everyone else has loaded you with CC, but, this is just a Q, ummm, what happened to her left arm?

Yeah, Lodoss rocks! She almost looks like she's straight from the anime. Great job! And your other works are amazing, too! Thank you.

am I the first to comment on the updated pick? never saw the old one, but this looks pretty good to me.Looks like fourth, actually. But thanks for the comment.

Just to start off...I really like elvish looking tanned anime people with light hair (something I just wuv!) But...*emphasis on that*....the proportions seem to be a tad off....with her shoulders...and her stomach seems awkward...(just some suggestions!) *_* Whoo...Thank you. I appreciate the critiques, although overall I'm happy enough with this image not to change it further.

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OMG! THIS IS SO COOL! I just LOVE THIS PIC!!! I'm a real big fan of RoLW, especially of the baddie Pirotess (or however you spell it. There are so many different ways)! Even though she's a meanie, she's still really cool! As I said before, I just LOVE the pic! Keep up the excellent work!

I didn't get the see the original, but I think the changes must have worked, because this version looks great! I love the shading. The pose conveys so much character. Love the white hair.