| 8 Jul 2000 | Michelle D. Latta | Oh yes Charcoal! Adore charcoal! You shade so well  | |
| 17 Jul 2000 | Adele Lorienne Sessler | Man, you are good with charcoal, hon!  Final Reality? Whaaah! That's an awesome name!! Heehee. Hypeeer toniiiight... *bounces out* | |
| 28 Jul 2000 | Zee Arteest! | Yeah, I know the eyes are bad. Really bad. Charcoal is kinda permenant though - it doesn't erase well o.0 | |
| 28 Jul 2000 | Katja Alakotila | Her chin and lips and neck are vvvvverrrry good, but you could work a bit more with her eyes. They seem slightly... hmm... flat. And some gloss on her hair wouldn't hurt either. But all in all this is a great picture. | |
| 9 Aug 2000 | Ludovica Wing Shuen Price | Pretty good for a first study...I love her hair, and the somewhat melancholy look on her face. I hope you do incorporate her into your story, she has character about her. Some sort of past. Hmmm... | |
| 16 Aug 2000 | George | She's gorgeous! Charcoal is definitely something I have to try some time. Have you done anything like this since?Actually, yes, I have. I drew one just yesterday (8/15) that I'll upload soon... | |
| 17 Jun 2001 | Michelle 'Raven' Spier | You really know how to capture stories in your subject's eyes. I don't mind her slight deformities. she's lovely. | |
| 13 Jan 2002 | Sarahtokira | I'm not sure, but I think you the placement of her right eye is a little off. I have no complaints about anything else. | |
| 8 Mar 2002 | Greg | i love your work on this piece. it brings up a some what sad mood to the air. Have you anymore personal drawings? | |