| 10 Sep 2003 |  Kyt DarkPaw | Deep, very deep... And so very true... | |
| 11 Sep 2003 | sheikahsorceress | whooooa great pic, and great poem as well. i shall keep a more wary eye on the innocent cherubs who flock about my school, bubbling and carefree....who knows what powers could be unleashed man? i mean, they already are crazy enough being SO incredibly good, imagine how incredibly BAD they can be? thanks for the thinking man, and again, great pic. | |
| 11 Sep 2003 | Kaeda | Err...she didn't say anything about the innocents being caged..she said that there was something locked INSIDE of everyone, and then later indicates that the something caged is darkness, and that one who is innocent has all but severed the darker part of them self...AND that said darker part if left to fester and FURTHER released...none will be spared!!
('course, she put it far more poetically than I, but hey.)
*lets have a cheer for run-on sentences!!*
Whatever the message, at least read the poem twice before critically analysing it!!! | |
| 11 Sep 2003 |  Sara 'Sunrunner' Rupp-Moody | I love that poem, it expresses so much and add to the art immeasurably. Keep adding the awesome poems. | |
| 11 Sep 2003 | Ashley | I love the poem. Have you ever read "The Child by Tiger" by Thomas Wolfe? It's about this seemingly gentle, pious man who suddenly snaps and murders a bunch of people. This entire work is very thought-provoking! (And the art is beautiful!!!) | |
| 11 Sep 2003 | The Sovereign of Happy | Eh heh heh heh... oh come on... "innocent in cages" ...? Who is it who will not be spared if the innocent are set free? The wicked ...? ... More to the point ... I think I know what you were trying to convey... but please try to word your writing as well as you draw your pictures. I find it dark and provocative ... the tear in the girl's eye is your greatest use of symbols as I've see thus far in your work. Most excellent!
-Sovereign of Happy | |
| 11 Sep 2003 |  Ryan Caisse | How many times have I felt this way? I seem to have lost count. Hold on to that sense you have. You are able to articulate things that others wish they could. | |
| 11 Sep 2003 | Kino | WOW! I've never thought of that before. So deep... But I like it! | |
| 11 Dec 2004 | FelBlood | Darkness is a like a dangerous pet.
If you keep it:
Take care that you feed it enough lest it devour you.
Take care not to feed it too much lest it devour us all. | |
| 11 Dec 2004 | BloodLust | There are nearly innocent people who are without guile or malice. Then they meet the human race, who promptly robs and hurts them until they learn better. The ones who don't learn better then, learn later when it's too late to defend themselves. Then they either let it go--or turn into someone like me. Fear us, for we are often armed and always dangerous. | |
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