| 15 Nov 2000 | Anon. | I thought the old spelling was Daemon. Ah well. Again, try to keep the tail at a uniform width. And what is her back foot on? Also, somebody seems to be stepping on her right foot. A dagger or other small weapon might make it easier to draw the front hand and increase the threatening pose. | |
| 24 Nov 2000 | Cally G. Steussy | The front hand needs some work. Don'cha hate hearing that? Look at your own hand, would be my advice. It's hard at first, but it really does help in the long run. She does look like her back foot is braced against something, but I'm not very articulate so I don't think I can explain how to fix it. She still looks like she's ready to pounce. Kudos! | |
| 7 Nov 2006 | Ravage & King critic | (R) Demon? she looks more li..
(K.C.) SHE LOOKS MORE LIKE A NORMAL GIRL WITH A CROWN AND SHE LOOKS LIKE SHE'S HOLDING A WHIP!!!!!!
(R) >.< RRRRRGGGGGGGG YOU STOLE MY COMMENT AGAIN!!!!!!! *GOES BERSERK*
(K.C.) o o *Wets himself, Then runs like sisy girl* | |