| 6 Sep 2000 |  China White | You want critisism Add some color
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| 21 Oct 2000 | Aubri | Interesting, although it's not what I thought he looked
like... | |
| 24 Nov 2000 |  Cally G. Steussy | I have to agree that he's not what I imagined that he would look like, but it still works. He just doesn't look angsty enough, I guess - not to mention that he looks like he's enjoying the sword work, and that doesn't exactly work. :-P Yeah, guys are tough, aren't they? I like to think that I've gotten good at them, and people still look at my pictures and tend to call them girls. *sighs* My advice would be to try giving him a longer face, work on legs (I know, I know, they're a pain for me too), and practice with drawing swords. | |
| 17 Dec 2000 | Bernice | here's one classic "manga-bishounen"!~@_@~good job! | |
| 18 Nov 2001 |  Chiara Brandstaetter | That is soooooo beautiful......... i just love the expression on her face | |
| 16 Dec 2001 | Werethylacine | He looks very determined... blood mages had better watch out. Next time could you draw the hair longer? Pretty please? With sugar and Stefan on top? | |
| 8 Jul 2002 | Russet | Hey, really nice pic! You said you wanted critisism, so here goes‹I think he should have some color (as everyone's said) maybe make his armor black and silver? ^^ Great job, but I really really think his hair should be longer ! *snifflez* i'm a stickler for the books! keep up the good work | |
| 23 Jul 2003 | Anonymous | Make him more man like but think "peacock" and remember all women think he is sexy so make him that way | |
| 21 Oct 2003 | Saeth-tan | I like Van with long hair.
But he looks really cute in this picture.
Where's the rest of his sword? | |
| 7 Nov 2006 | King critic | Finished? BOY?! HE LOOKS LIKE A GIRL!!! >.< | |
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