| 14 Jun 1999 | Sylvie Jackson | Not bad; she really does look like she's descending, though i suggest you have her looking down a little more the next time you do a "from above" picture. she'd want to see where she was landing. Your watercolor skills are pretty good, you should do more. Her left thigh needs to be straightened out along the top, but it's still good | |
| 20 Aug 1999 | Simon Desgrez | I like very much this one. Getting rid off photo realistic tendencies to keep the heart of art. I would have liked you to work a little bit more on her right arm as muscles should appear on a twisted arm. Once again, good work. | |
| 22 Dec 1999 | Cynthia Lane Armstrong | I think it's great. nice, dynamic pose, and I happen to be a fan of those colors. And I appreciate the fact that you didn't exaggerate her female body. | |
| 7 Feb 2000 | Mr. cow | more watercolor plz!!!!!!!!! | |
| 17 Apr 2000 | Christine Osborne | Congratulations!!Your wonderful pic has been chosen to feature in my "The Assassins of Elfwood" tour! ^_~ | |
| 13 May 2000 | Melissa | Use more variants of color, that's why I like watercolor. Also, the black stuffs of the background is there supposed to be a shadow? if not, you need to work more on washes. | |
| 12 Sep 2000 | omar | A mi entende ella sale de la oscuridad hacia la luz haviendo peleado primero alli,sus ojos encendidos asi como su color le dan un toque de especial sin igual a la obra.Para mi representa el despertar y es otra exxxxelente obra de arte.
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| 7 Jan 2002 | Mysterious Black Cloaked Figure | Very nice picture, however, the sheaths were usually attached to a belt, sot that the sword wielders wouldn’t have to discard it. | |