| 10 Mar 1999 |  Casey R. Barthels | Not bad... I agree with the comment a couple lines up. Your background black is warm and your drawing black is cool..warm up the drawing or cool down the background.. just a suggestion? | |
| 14 Apr 1999 |  William Li | the lighting is good. the upper arm is bent (that bone should be straight, right?) and a bit too long. the proportions of the lower arm could use some improvement as well. i like the gradient, but try to blur the outline of the figure. | |
| 25 May 1999 | John Teall | hold out your receiving hand and cover your left brest with your giving hand - now do thou solumnly receive this token of the community of the great energy beam whidh has been summoned to purify your inner being even as you stand sky-clad - your abloutions having sanctified your outer self... and so on - definately the right mood (witnessess such as ourselves would undoubtedly not normaly be pressent i'm guessing - just initiates, adapts, and priest/priestess masters...) | |
| 14 Jun 1999 |  Sylvie Jackson | I don't know anything about "toryns" so I am probably being an idiot, but what's that stuff on her collarbone? Good lighting, I like it. The left hand is weird but like David said, hands are irritating and the picture looks good anyway--just practice drawing them more | |
| 2 Aug 1999 | Melissa | The jawbone seems ta stop short before it does and is outlined a little too much. Also, I dunno about the Toryn peeps, but her collarbone is a wee bit..big? And the things in the neck I dunna remember wha they called, but they also big. And...heh just kidding. It's really cool besides. | |
| 24 Dec 1999 |  Cynthia Lane Armstrong | I really like your use of shading. She's certainly three-dimensional. | |
| 13 May 2000 | Melissa | Her shoulder should be better defined than her collar bone, also you shouldn't try something so direct. Direct front or direct side is highly immature. the arm is off, the shading doesn't match the rest of the drawing, study hands. | |
| 12 Sep 2000 | omar | en mi opinion la esena representa la vida pidiendo que se hacerque la luz pero con verguenza o timides hacia ella tremendo travajo ademas nos dice que nadie es perfecto | |
| 7 Jan 2002 | Mysterious Black Cloaked Figure | Very nice, however, if you had her wearing some clothing, her right hand wouldn’t be in such an "awkward" position. | |
| 9 Jan 2003 | Brekke | i guess i am starting to become a fan. I like the shading. Hands are such annoying things to draw, but you can do it. You seem to be doing the hair the same way in alot of you pics. Go to www.Howtodrawmanga.com That site might help. | |
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