| 13 May 2000 | Melissa | Study people's legs when they squat or something, make a friend squat, the calf doesn't disappear and the thigh shifts. | |
| 3 Jun 2000 | Burn | This is nice, but I'm going to be brutally honest. The hair covers a lot more of the face than it should, but you already explained that. The calves need to be just a little thicker or else the thighs need to be a bit thinner. The only other thing is that the parts of the wings closest to the body are just a little out of proportion. It's a very good work for your first India ink and nib. The curves are smooth and the shading is pretty decent, too. | |