| 2 Jul 2000 |  Yong-Tae Lee | I like the pose. Something that you can do to help the illustration is make the face a little longer. The left arm also seems a little small for the body, especially around the shoulder. | |
| 22 Sep 2000 |  Anon. | great job!Especially the legs there perfect!!!!!! | |
| 27 Dec 2000 | Anon. | ho my god i'm so bad...sorry | |
| 27 Dec 2000 | iud:silver | oups...mess up whit my name... | |
| 27 Dec 2000 | iud:paquin | I agree that the body is...well..."hum".... strange .... but the head is just perfect as can be ! | |
| 29 Jul 2001 |  Manfred H. Meisinger | Right. The body doesn't look very comftable to her face, but all in all a very detailde sthing. I like it | |
| 10 Apr 2002 | Wiccan Wonder | Hmmmm.....well....Like someone said previously, fantastic job on the legs and the face but I would tone down the muscle a little and ither raise her shoulders or shorten her neck. | |
| 26 Jun 2002 | Wolfmanmachine | Assuming that this drawing is supposed to realistically represent a woman, I see a few problems. First, her neck looks too long. Second, the musculature in her left arm looks odd - maybe her arm is too thin near the shoulder. I've had problems like this myself. I tend to make torsos and shoulders too wide and necks too long. I think it's because I usually draw the legs first and then have trouble getting the rest of the proportions correct. Still, it's a good drawing. | |
| 1 Sep 2003 | Crystal Johnson | The only problems are her head is to small, and so are her arms. | |
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