| 28 Nov 2002 | Yashie | Love it, i come from the land of daffodils!! Its kinda transparent. Great. | |
| 29 Nov 2002 | Lisa B. | Don't listen to Jaden. Ur Fairy is charming. I love it. | |
| 29 Nov 2002 | Jaden | this picture needs work first because dafodils aren't trasnparent, the head is to big for it's body, and it needs more depth. you only draw surface features. Let's just say colored pencils aren't your medium, maybe you should try charcoal or oils. Try finding an art book somewhere because whatever concept you were trying to develop... didn't. And you "art" is horrible, my little sister could draw better.  Erin Peta Smith replies: "OPEN YOUR MIND TO OTHER PEOPLES STYLES, this is how I draw I did not FORCE you to look at it you I do not care for your negativity and I don’t care about your sister... woohooo she may have talent.. but how does that relate to me?!?ps daffodils are transparent if ya play with the petals enough, just like all other petals." | |
| 13 Mar 2003 | Arani Silvershadow <Iguanadonna@myf.. | Keh!Jaden remind me uff that baka Ingan at Ceobryn.@.@ Anywho,I think yer pic is really cool!That's neat how you turned the daffodil trumpet into a dress.Sure i couldn't of thought of that.^.^*claps* | |
| 17 Oct 2003 | Dragongirl317 | yeah, jaden's a moron, cuz really, thats just how you do art, and i love it! i really wish i could draw like that. i can draw, but not that good, i just do cartoons and stuff like that. PS: jaden's a moron | |
| 5 Nov 2003 | Gevauden <x__drag0n_fire__x@ho | Yeah, Arani (Issy), Jaden IS like Ingan! lmao, that's hilarious.
By the way, your drawing is beautiful, she has such an air of delicate innocence, she's really cute. | |
| 3 Jan 2004 | Cynthea Halcyone Cotton | I like the idea of this picture but I think it needs a bit of developement. Hold tight to your style, of course, but consider working on the following elements. And please don't hurt me if you dislike my comments. *ducks*
1) she looks a bit unbalanced, like shes about to fall over, may have happened when you scanned it, maybe fix that?
2) the dress looks rather rough for a thin transparent petal, perhaps obtain some colouring implements you can smudge with the achieve the effect you seem to desire?
3) in terms of classical body sizing, the head IS a bit large, I think either shrinking OR enlarging it would make the picture either more realistic OR more stylized, but it seems to be at an akward point between the two styles.
4) nice wings
5) at her, erm, crotch, she seems to be wearing some sort of panty or bodysuit, yet we see no evidence of this at the top with a neckline or something of the sort. Perhaps it is attached right where the top of the petals are, or perhaps you could add a neckline, and maybe some neat petal sleeves to explain this nuance?
6)do you have trouble with hands? if you do, you've hidden it well, her pose looks believeable, unlike many others I've seen. Well done.
All in all I like it, but I do see room for improvement, but for the record, I say that for 99.9% of art I see, so its NOT just you.
Happy drawing! | |