| 30 Sep 2000 |  Kelly Turnbull | OOOOOOOOoooooooooooOOOOOOOOOOOoooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Lookit da rat! It's Blackjack!! He's gonna use that little concoction to turn it into a giant rodent, right? (I notice all the little things)
Now you have me **very** curious. Who's Blackjack? | |
| 2 Oct 2000 |  Alex Aal | Perhaps you can add a shelfs with books behind him. Aslo the area beneath the table needs to be very dark. | |
| 2 Oct 2000 | Maria 'Arrow' Rodriguez | Cool, I always love stories about Alchemists they're interesting to think about the people who thought out of the box. | |
| 8 Oct 2000 | Victoria E. Brennan | I love the glowing effect you got with your lighting. The facial expression is great!! Awesome pic  | |
| 8 Oct 2000 |  Carrie Gross | Hmm, This is really groovy. I know it's unfinished, so I feel more comfortable giving friendly tips... I might be completely off the mark on this, but perhaps you could have some of the light bouncing off the table to hit the bottom of his sleeves. And I agree w/ the person who said the area beneath the table needs to be dark. Make the walls behind him a little darker, too, cos the light would be dissipating as it gets farther away from the source. *peace* | |
| 20 Oct 2000 |  Liang Ding | ah... alchemistry, science of the dreamers... pretty fascinating stuff. since you are obviously quite good at shading, my best suggestion is that you should finish... and a version of this in color could be really cool....I can just imagine...dark room..glowing test tubes and beackers.. ^_^ oh by the way, that astonished look on his face is really well done. | |
| 22 Oct 2000 | Dennis Lee Sherwood | Wow this has the impresion that he mixed the wrong chemicals and they flashed. | |
| 4 Nov 2000 |  Linda Gock | The lighting effect is really effective, but I think you can still afford to pay more attention to the face and the shading there, as it is quite a focal point in the pic. | |
| 8 Nov 2000 |  Nadia L. Vélez | It looks cool. Is the light source in the table, cuz from the shadows that's what it looks like. I like this one. Yes, in fact, it's coming from the glass container on the table. | |
| 14 Feb 2001 |  Julie R. Kowalski | Ya know...ya really outta do more figure drawings and more realism like this one because you really have a knack for the shading, expression and anatomy...this is one of my fav's.....do more like this! | |
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