| 9 Nov 2004 | Maria Ringsevjen | That is ball point pen? *gasp!* I mess up when trying something with pen, so I just stay away! hehe. This is really clean and clear. The details put into it are great, and though I like the coloured version too, you see more of the details in this, especially on the sword. Good job  | |
| 15 Dec 2004 | Jenny M. Heidewald | I love the details and cross-hatching/shading on this piece, the clothes are amazing. I think the hands are fine, the one is a bit farther away and turned ( so perspective comes into play), and the one holding the sword well you can't see all of it anyways. I can think of only one thing to add to make this picture perfect, that would be a background.  Now I have to go see if I can find that colored version Maria was talking about.  | |
| 15 Dec 2004 | Lordschrappy | Constructive critic: Too small hands. | |
| 16 Dec 2004 | Shannon Poehlman | Kicks her ball-point pens under bed to collect dust::
Oh and the reason the hand is small is because its kinda back behind the body. Like hes reaching back. That would cause proportions to shrink a bit and give depth to the picture. Nicely exicuted. Where do you get your ideas for your poses? | |
| 3 Nov 2005 | Lipták László | Really nice character! | |
| 12 May 2006 | Anonymous | Elrohir looks a bit too old. but great drawing still! wish i could make things look realistic. | |
| 12 Dec 2006 | Carissa Szarkowski | You should keep sketching with them. Excellent work. | |