| 3 Nov 2000 | Rachel Jennings | I like your idea for this one, the pose is nice. I think that you should work a bit on your proportions a bit though. It would really help it out. Her head appears to be small for her body. Just a smidgin. (c: | |
| 5 Nov 2000 | Emily | I am sorry to say but her head is way to small for her body. But the rest is pretty ok. | |
| 9 Dec 2000 | James | Very true, her head is too small, sorry, my forte is men/male creatures in armor with pointy weapons and the oher details like day to day items rope etc. Thank you, this is actually one of my tries at drawing a female person based on the "there are four basic body shapes" idea. Thank you I try to do better in future. | |