| 13 Nov 2003 | Aaron Weaver | Looks cool for a start. Scene seems a little confusing, have to watch the lines in the picture. People's eyes follow the light/dark and lines in the picture. Your focal point is the spaceship but it does not stand out that much. Check out some art theory, stuff like compostion and eye leading. A lot of it will work for 3d too. I have problems with eye leading too, so you are not alone.  Carlo Bottiglieri replies: "Yep, I had noticed that the ship was lost due to wrong lightining, mine is often a battle between adding realistic light sources from realistic spots and placing lights just to highlight the right stuff." | |