| 19 Apr 2001 |  Henning Janssen | dutch beach scene ... nice, William! But I agree! The knees are a little low. What else? Well somehow she seems to lean on air, not on her arm and certainly not on the sword. The upper part of her left arm is a bit high compared to the shoulder. ... but yet: great colours and nice total composition! | |
| 16 May 2001 |  Nina Roussakova | Oooh...very well done! I love the girl sitting on the sand! The one standing, you should move the sword forwards... it's too far back... if one would lean on it like that, they would surely fall (especially because sand doesn't hold things as well as soil) | |
| 19 May 2001 |  Charlotte E. Witsenburg | Is it inspired by Joshua Smith's "Sword Lady"? Ah well, love it! The anatomy is so good... and the colors..... *sigh* | |
| 23 May 2001 |  Livia | Whitch one is the princess? | |
| 2 Jun 2001 |  Arjen E. Pilon | In addition to all other comments, I'd say that they're placed a bit close to each other, maybe move the standing elf a bit more to the back (re-aligning her with her sword maybe), or the sitting one to the front.
All that said, it is a great pic anyways! | |
| 11 Aug 2001 | Michael | Add some kind or rock below the sword. Then it works. Sword is a little higher to lean on and it's not going to sink into the sand.
Presumably there are a few rocks here and there on this beach? | |
| 17 Jul 2002 | Chrisitna | You should have a little bit o' red on the ladys feet *the one on the ground* cause imagane this "your runnign through the sandy dunes, the sun beating down on you, the sand hot underneth your feet, your feet feeling as if they were meltng.." get it? | |
| 8 Jan 2003 | Anonymous | the chik siyying down is the same as about 3-4 pics bak but all in all its O.K. | |
| 21 Sep 2004 | A crazy person | What is the big white thingie | |
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