| 19 Jun 2001 | Rosie Smith a.k.a female fred | Looks kinda link vincent from ff7. I agree with the cloak thing, not that im one to complain, seeing as i have never drawn ne thing that good in my entire life. But, hey, im a writer, what does it matter?   Jennifer G. Sewalt replies: "I think this one was FF7 inspired, unfortunately. I didn't really set out to make my character look like he belonged in that game, but I think I may have done it subconsciously. Either way, Lochiver is not really going to look like this in the end, so I'm not really worried about it. PS: Writing is good, me too!" | |
| 19 Jun 2001 | Emily Arnould | Very nice!  This piece reminds me of anime, in a way. I would suggest adding a little more to his cloak, even if it's just a couple of crinkle lines. The large mass of white is a bit disconcerting. Other than that, I love it!  Jennifer G. Sewalt replies: "Thanks! I definitely was skimping on cloak details. Perhaps if I update this picture, I shall keep your comments in mind!" | |
| 10 Jul 2002 | Jessica 'PantherJess' Mwangi | I love it! the wind movement and the expression are perfect! Nice work it's perfect! PantherJess  Jennifer G. Sewalt replies: "Thank you. " | |