| 14 May 2000 |  Andy | If it's windy, I bet she's cold. Then again, I bet she doesn't care. I think I'll run now. | |
| 5 Jun 2000 |  Kathryn P. Falk | Her shoulder guards remind me of Deedlit (Lodoss Wars). I dun wanna run into 'er! | |
| 11 Jun 2000 |  'Lilac' J.S. Heltzell | Okay okay... I JUST realized how bad this looks on here... I'd seriously appreciate any suggestions on how I can improve the quality of this picture. | |
| 27 Jun 2002 | Javanae | Hey, it doesn't look that bad. I like te windy effect, and the colors. | |
| 20 Jun 2003 | Anonymous | You said someone else's art was bad, but yours is just as bad...matey! | |
| 5 Dec 2003 | Mich | the distance between her abdomen and her crotch is WAY too small... and her legs are a bit too small. | |
| 26 Aug 2005 | Katie | The background could be darker if it was a forest, or if not is it a very cold day? When i first saw this i thought it was a man cause of the very broad neck and no shaplyness at all. I'm sorry to be evil and saying what i think's wrong, but you did ask for advice or something. Naughty girl being nasty to other artists tutt tutt *waves finger at you* | |
| 26 Aug 2005 | Completely Anonymous | Yeah well i reckon that it's a good picture, i just think that's the colouring is a nice choice, but..... hmmm the proportions umm.... the waist and the crotch is far to small. I agree totally with the person above me. the hair could do with some shines, i think. but come on! you cant really be 21!! | |
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