| 14 Apr 2002 | Liu Yiqing | I like the way you drew and shaded the wall. The vines twisting along it add a little something to the picture as well. I will admit it doesn't look as though he's holding thunderbolts to me, either.. ^^; I noticed that you'd added a lighter glow about the bolts -- that's working, but perhaps the effect would be a little more obvious if the halo of light was expanded? In any case, the shading overall's very well done, I likes. ^^  Winifred Von Jenovia replies: "Thanks! I had to crop out part of the wall for the elfwood picture, and there is a lot more with more vines. They are what I enjoyed the most about drawing it. Expanding the halo would help, and now that I think about it maybe if the thunderbolts didn't look like cardboard cutouts. " | |