| 23 May 2001 |  Nicole Chartrand | nice shading on the face and neck, but you should also do the hair, because as it is, it looks like he's got some kind of funky fur skullcap on! ;ˇ) | |
| 6 Jan 2002 |  Julie R. Kowalski | It's especially hard for me to draw men as well...women are easier for some reason but you have a great start with the thick neck and kinda square jawline...one thing that I have found that makes men look more like men is kinda squaring their eyes instead of pointing them and rarley having them smile...but excellent pic, great shading!...do more! | |
| 15 Apr 2002 | Hettar7 | The shading is good. The delicate mouth and the shape of the face and eyes make him look feminine however. The jawline could be more blockish and the lips need to look less petite. The hair does need to be colored in, it looks too plain compared to the shading on the skin. The position of the hand is off, it would probably be more to the left than straight down. Good start. Just keep working on anatomy and consistency in shading and everything. | |
| 5 Jul 2002 |  Marius Ernst | Well, there's nothing wrong with the face, it's really the face of the boy, but the body is that of a man. I guess his neck is a bit long and his shoulders are too broad. However, I'm not sure, I'm not an anatomy hero myself  | |
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