| 3 Oct 2000 | Harley Black | if you check out my site you'll see Im not the best with the male form either, but I do have a couple of suggestions...make the shoulders and chest a bit broader, also the hips need to be a bit more angular(sp?) but other then that this is a real nice looking piece | |
| 10 May 2001 | Lucinda | The head is very good, as is his face. As for his body..... it shows that you draw mostly women. His body looks to slender, and has a vaugely feminine feel to it. His shoulders & chest should be broader, his hips more angular.... And the posture needs altered. It adds to the female impression. ( I get this speech from my Husband & some of his friends bout my pictures all the time) | |
| 21 May 2001 | Celesta | This is a great picture. I love the face, very handsome and chisseled like. But, i have acouple nitpicks. First of all, the shoulders are waaaayyy to narrow. It DOES show that your a woman drawer, and the hips too are also too narrow. I mean, men don't have as large of hips as women, but they're not porportioned (<sp?)The hands are too small for the overall perspective of things, they should be masculine, and bigger. Other than that, it's a great start and if you keep practicing, you'll eventually get it right! Don't give up!! Great job! | |
| 2 Mar 2002 | Anonymous | It's good. Better than I could ever do, but his face is to square and his shoulders...fall. Make the shoulders straight and the face less square and he'd be practically perfect. | |
| 12 Mar 2002 | Anonymous | Hey, I think your art's wonderful. And you just might be able to draw beautiful women for the rest of your life, you do a great job. (lol) His face looks almost exactly like a guy my mom works with, though. It's sorta funny cause he's a photographer as a hobby sorta, a side job. Thanks for reading my comment, and I think you capture the beauty and life of feminemity very very well. (I think I spelled that wrong, but I spell alot of things wrong anyway, lol) | |
| 9 Jun 2002 | Wolff | Hey, I thought it was pretty good, better than mine! Haha, anyway... You made his shoulders a little bit to slender in my opinion. You hafta exagerate those things for the big burly guys, it'll look great. | |
| 5 Oct 2002 | Shannyn | He looks like Conan O'Brien, but buff. | |
| 8 Oct 2004 | Cindylee Phillips | He's adorable. You can just hear him saying "But, I don't want to use this...thing...it's too heavy, I might strain my wrist!" very feminine...like a prince that's too spoiled. I love it!! | |
| 9 Jun 2005 | Camena | Men are more block-ey than women. Don't curve the hips as much or go as far in with the torso. Square the shoulders a bit. | |