| 23 Nov 2004 | Erones | He looks agast. | |
| 29 Dec 2004 | Lynn Michelle McDonald | i love it and the story very nice but so SAD | |
| 10 Sep 2005 | Gray | A quick question, why is the dude wearing renasaunce clothes while the aquarium is obviously modern? aside from that great pic and story, I love all your stuff. | |
| 23 Mar 2006 | Ferie dust <sarahc@hou...com> | This pic is so sad!  | |
| 7 May 2006 | Peter Malone <Petermalone@hot...com | First of all nice concept, I do think though that Erica's extention on to the ending though is cool. The pic does have the desired affect of having one feel for the mermaid. | |
| 28 Sep 2006 | Lhena <animefreak9347@yah...com> | So when she started to play the flute did the boy wake from his sudden death and she see bubbles and save him with her everlasting breath from the air in the water she filtered out from her hidden gills? That would be a nice descriptive ending to this. | |
| 8 Dec 2006 | Shade | H!Wish i had a aquarium like that!  really good. | |
| 8 May 2007 | Katrena | Your stories are making me so sad. But I like sad stories for some unknown reason. It's good for someone to cry every now and then. | |
| 25 Jul 2007 | Anonymous | Nice drawing man!Love it. Good proportions. Love the hair, ears, tail, boobs. | |
| 19 Feb 2008 | Mermaidmagic | *tear* I’m saddened now *sniffle* Thank you for you heart WRENCHING story...........I’m gunna go cry now :..(
good story by the way and awesome picture! | |