| 21 Jan 2004 |  Freezy69babe | Yay!!!*dus da 1st comment dance* wooooohoooo!! Lol anyway nice pik i like da guys face, lol thers sumfin bout dat lady tho, cant quite put my finga on it  love all ur otha work 2 | |
| 12 Dec 2004 | Anonymous | Why is the warrior girl fat? She does look fat.Chubby even.The mage is good though.........Chubby li'l girl.... | |
| 31 Aug 2006 | John Nowak | Anonymous is right. Just because muscle detail is less visible in strong women than strong men doen't mean that the muscular parts of the body are that smooth. You did the arms more or less properly in this respect, but give her a belly tuck (I don't think that's what the correst term is, but get rid of the protruding curve of the lower torso when you redo this, okay?) | |
| 1 Sep 2006 | John Nowak | Oh, and her shoulders should be bigger, and her legs just a little smaller. In case you didn't FULLY understand my last comment (in other words, I left out a detail), her belly should be flatter. It's not that I intend to, let alone like to, insult the intelligence of others. It's just that I like to state all the details I can and want to. Also, you should add muscle detail wherever needed. | |
| 1 Sep 2006 | John Nowak | Oh, and her shoulders should be bigger, and her legs just a little smaller. In case you didn't FULLY understand my last comment (in other words, I left out a detail), her belly should be flatter. It's not that I intend to, let alone like to, insult the intelligence of others. It's just that I like to state all the details I can and want to. | |
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