| 27 Oct 2002 | Jeanette 'Syrie' Ho | It looks really good overall, but you need a bit more shading underneith her chin on the bottom image. Her head looks a little float-y. And.. cop-out! You should finish that 2nd guy! | |
| 2 Mar 2003 | Sara 'Arora' Clesi | you're going very good, you should keep it up. not that many people can draw manga. It takes a special talent to get everything down, but don't forget about the sword. it kinda vanished somewhere  Angel Johanna Schooff replies: "Ahhh... I was wondering when somebody would ask about that. You see, I was too lazy to draw it happening in the manga, although I really should have... You see the little things on the bending corner of her belt? THAT'S where her sword goes. It's mAgIc... Also, she adds Darek's sword to it as well, so there's an extra larger thing in the middle. Thanks for commenting! " | |