good start on your sketches , you need to add a little shading and deth to them , it will make a big diferance in the finished product! keep at it

Wohoo! Nice to see another face from almost off the elfwood map Great stuff! Heaps good start! I love the "Big Morgan" pic. Cool beastie thingee with nice size and strength. Your composition is also very good, but I think I will have to agree with Gabriel. A teensy bit of shading in the smallest of places sometimes is magical!

Jonathon P. Side replies: "Actually... I did quite a bit of shading with Herman and Morgan, I think... but the scanner kinda stole it."

Some nice work here. It needs alittle more dimension though.

Hey! Cool stuff! I like the karnashyun, it is the karnashyun isn't it?!? Anyhow, you seem to have an eye for detail!

I'm looking forward to the day you put some ink on these fine sketches, and maybe, maybe, even just a little bit of... Colour! *gasps* nice stuff, keep it up!

Jonathon P. Side replies: "Heh, colour will be a ways off, as will ink... I'm not even sure right now how I drew these to begin with."

Nice drawings! Very good a little depth(shading) will work wonders on any drawing depending on if you want the outline of the body dark so as so to speak that the person's skin is glowing then shadows will do a whole bunch for you. Being a little bit of a novise isnt bad...(did i spell that right lol?)I hated my teacher when he told me to shade in the tiniest little spots because i had been shading in the very beginning but only the larger areas and the little spots really do bring the pictures out so hope you keep working hard on the pics.

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