| 6 Jun 2002 |  Kirsten Taylor | oh! i forgot to say something in my last post. If you were intending him to look shocked, then his eyes should be a bit wider, with more of the iris showing on the top of his eyes and the pupils a bit wider. I can't wait to see this finished, it's just beautiful. you are very talented and i am very impressed by your linework and your coloring skill. | |
| 21 Jun 2002 |  Anneliese "CalicoTiger" Stehwien | What you've got colored here so far looks fantastic. The shading on his arm is just amazing! | |
| 28 Jun 2002 |  Brianne Dahlin | I like the simplicity of this one Kami. And to me it doesn't look like he is surprised, but rather that he is in the middle of saying something to Envy. And to whoever asked if they were having sex....if they are, then they are using some alien technique that certainly doesn't involve taking off clothes or making any contact with one another other than hands.... | |
| 12 Jun 2003 | Nathalie | Please, please, please!!!! Finish this! | |
| 22 Aug 2003 | *phreak | I think you already know how good you are, so I won't blather on about that. Just to comment on his facial expression- He looks like hes singing to her. And it almost looks as though he can't see her... | |
| 4 Dec 2003 | Anonymous | Love you're art
Specially Faileas and Envy pictures
But this keep buggin me
Why foes faileas seem so fat in this one? | |
| 16 Jun 2004 | Fred | Nice art, however i think in this peice, his eyes look too unfocused on her. | |
| 13 Mar 2006 |  Suzanne Helmigh | finish this!!!  please? | |
| 24 Mar 2006 | Anonymous | So she finally gets him? Isn't that always the way with seductresses.... | |
| 4 Apr 2006 | Fireclaw Elf | Lineart and Realism. Dare we attempt to cross such barriers between pencils and CG? Can a relationship like this ever last? Or will it be another trajic tale of starcrossed lovers, destined for sorrow.... *cough* Ahem. So... too bad your not much for criticism... because I think you should know the dude would look better (in my humble oppinion) with a more masculin nose (less delicate) and thicker eyebrows. He'd look more masculin. Just saying... | |
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