| 5 Nov 2002 | Jeremy Dylan Mohler | Hey James! Looking good! Your figurework is getting much better, I can tell you've been practicing. Shading looks alright as well, though, everything seems almost to be in the same tone. What I might suggest thinking about(and this is something I'm working on myself in my own work)is to have extremely dark dark's(maybe black)and extremely white white's(say...white). Then maybe work in some tones in between. Either way, good work! | |
| 23 Nov 2002 | Martin Trudeau | Looks good, i like the armor and the bow! The heads looks a little weird but nothing important  | |