| 15 Apr 2000 |  Jenni Bravo | oooooh, purdy colors. Do I smell... GEL PENS????? ^_^ | |
| 16 Apr 2000 | Jessica Smith | Your a pretty mature guy so umm I was just wondering have you ever even seen a female body? Judging by your picture or should I say shapeless person, you could use a reminder of what our bodys (females) look like. I hate to break it to you.. but I am VERY female.. and I DO know exactly how MY body looks.. as well as any other female body I have ever seen in my life. The female DOES have shape in this picture... but you must remember.. she IS kinda turning into a BIRD.. of which doesn't USUALLY have hips, breasts, or shapely legs!  | |
| 7 Oct 2000 | Terrago | I agree with Jessica, the body seems to be shapeless... I know she's turning into a bird but the parts that are still human should have more detail than you put into them. The wings seem to be very... um, strange. With wings shaped like that she'll never be able to fly. I recommend you look at some pictures of eagles or hawks and study their wings before drawing another picture like this, the wings have good detail but are... um, shapeless. | |
| 13 Nov 2000 | Hippie_chick | Jessica - why are you so nasty?! If the body had been shaped more like a woman, it would have looked like some chick with wings (faerie-thingie). But it's not; it's half bird. (Although I'd love to see a bird with breasts! *g*) good work. | |
| 13 Jun 2003 | Lina | Gosh, what's with all the insults? I like this picture, I like the whole idea. Plus, I looooove the wings, sure she can fly! | |
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