| 22 Feb 2000 | Patrick R. Derksen | You're great at getting the shape and outlines done; it would profit from some shading and highlights, perhaps. I like the way you draw wings. | |
| 7 Jul 2000 | Ryan | The wings are quite good, as are the feet/claws. So many people do horribly on those. I agree that color and shading would turn this good pic into an amazing one. TTYL! | |
| 25 Jun 2001 | Angela M. Rosquin | Minkers!  Bad bad Djali, never coloring. Color something!  | |