| 19 Nov 1999 | Cally G. Steussy | "You say I am a hero, / Because I wield a blade. / You say naught of the graves / In which my friends are laid." Sorry, that's a poem I wrote, it seemed emminently appropriate . . . The man's upper arms look elongated, especially compared to how tiny his forearms are . . . might want to see if you can fix that before coloring. Wonderful picture, though - and a fairly ignored concept. | |
| 7 Feb 2000 | Carly | *stares at the picture for a long moment, then sighs and stares some more* Mmmm... It is a wonderful picture, and very depressing. However, there is something slightly off about it, and I can't put my finger on it... Try staring at it for a bit before coloring it. I love the idea, and the pic is great. (Maybe I'm hallucinating the problem?) | |
| 23 Mar 2000 | Anon. | you're not hallucinating, the picture looks blurry in some spots, other than that, it looks good. | |
| 5 Aug 2003 | Anne, 'biisis' Pasek | hmmm.... what's wit mortaly injured people and their fondness for leaning against trees? Hmmm.... the colores here seem a bit too vivid in spots. The flower is a nice touch but I'd make it a diffrent color. the salmon clashes. The guy's got excellent pose for what it's worth. | |