| 29 Apr 2001 | Krzystof Detemmerman | Well...I thought it was a big ape. A ugly ape, but still a ape. | |
| 10 May 2001 | Krzystof Detemmerman | You know what you should do. Try to draw it again, but leave this one on, so ppl can see how you've progresd. Try to remove the middle line, it's useless. MAke the cape go wider as it goes lower. Then make the opening in the cape smaller and close it at the botton with a tie or a medalion. And his eyes stand to close together. It's hard to explain how to do it, but try and put it up so I can see the progress^_^ Cu | |
| 24 Aug 2001 | Keetsie Joy | This is a good start! I like the solidity of the shading, and the glowing eyes. Some folds and wrinkles might be a good idea to give the cloak some more form. You could also try to make it follow the shape of his shoulders and upper torso a little more. This guy looks pretty sneaky and cunning... definitely not a trustworthy guy, eh? Good job at making him look mysterious! | |