| 3 Aug 1999 |  Bonnie | oh, oh, I'm the first one to comment. I think this picture has a very nice idea going to it, although I think she could use more facial expression, maybe of anger | |
| 10 Oct 1999 | Lucca | Uh,what is that? Some sorta merthing with bat wings?
The proportions need a little work. Make the waist shorter and thinner, but not too thin. Make the legs LOOOOOOONG like in anime, it woul add to the pic a bit. Also, give it some emotin. The wings could stand to be bigger too. I mean, think about it, how are those puny little things gonna generate enough lift to get her more than an inch off the ground?!? | |
| 8 Jun 2004 | Gwendolyn | well...yeah. it's a pretty good drawing.  and for the anatomy part, I'd suggest you make her waist curve a little, very few women have straight hips. and, make the legs flow a little, cause right now it seems like their just being stuck on. and, make the wings way bigger. she's never gonna take off with those. at least I think not. lol. | |
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