SciFi and Fantasy Art: Ferin, Elven Magechild.

*ehem*
I'm terribly mean whilst I do this, so I'm appologizing before I start.
I'M SORRY!!!!
There.

Anyway, your title was; 'Ferin, Elven Magechild'. Magechild? Does that mean he's a kid?
If so, his facial features are waaaaay too mature for him.
If not, his head is much too big.
If he's an adult, his hands are too small... but if he's a kid, it's fine.
The fire is tilted at an angle, which isn't really something fire does.
I think you need a little work on preportions, my friend. His left arm (Mr. Flamey over there) is ok, (the elbow should come down to his belly-button) but the other arm is WAY too short. It looks like somebody cut his arm off a little below the elbow! (OWCH!)
BTW, this picture is great, but I suggest attempting a few defined wrinkles 'n shading!
This is great work!

He isn't thinking. Sorry, I'm not trying to criticize (although you do need some) but he seems rather blank, simply watching something impassively.

He's thinking: "Ouch, I shouldn't have looked into the bright light." or pondering some deep thought.

Ah, He's thinking "So, my hand is on fire. Oh, you find this strange?" The pictures pretty good, but the proportions are off. His heads a bit too big for his body But I like the face.

I really like his eye and the clouths are really good 2.

He's thinking, "Why, yes... I'm flaming. Isn't it obvious?"

Why, yes, i *DO* think that this bluew brings out my eyes.........

anyway, thae hands are slightly small, but well drawn.
the tilting of the flame and him is wrong,
and the head is slightly too big.

but hey! im just starting too, so dont feel bad if you get alot of criticizm! (aakk, cant speell, Huukid unn Fonix wurkud 4 ew, twoo?

BA! You CHARLATANS!!! You all copied my 'hand on fire' joke!!! Go away and get some CLASS!!! Better yet, go away and DON'T BOTHER COMING BACK!!!

There, now I'm over my testosterone filled rage...

Are you sure it's testosterone, you could have confused it with PMSing or hormones. You need to see a doctor. HONEY. From your friend the American.

'and now I shall decimate this inept fool... oh hi, I didn't see you standing there' o_O