SciFi and Fantasy Art: Ginoid *COLOR*

when I saw the word 'criticize' I thought I was going to have a field day with your pic. But the only thing wrong with it is her hand is a bit small. I like her out fit, by the way.

Aida Vicens replies: "Thankiessss... Mmm... Yes. I noticed it when I was drawing it, and I tried to fix it then... but then it was too big. I erased it and drawed it again, and again... And I had to chose between this one and one that seemed something like... a rotten apple with a spike... terrible."

Thats a pretty good drawing(better than i could ever do). The only thing that needs working on is maybe steadier lines(some are a bit too wavy) but other than that its perfect.

Aida Vicens replies: "Thanks... ^_^ I've never thought it was that good as you tell me, but I'm glad you like it. And yes, the lines are TOO MUCH wavy... but I hadn't noticed before... Thank you very much, I'll try to fix that, if I can."

I agree with the steady lines thing but I love the face

Aida Vicens replies: "I'm glad you do... because it's one of my favourite parts on this pic."

Can I have her pants?? they are really cool!!!I also like her face! she looks sort of scary, but in a good way!! Great job!will you color her??!

Aida Vicens replies: "Yes, of course I'm gonna color her. I'm so proud of this one, dunno why. And of course you can have her pants just... wait until she decides to change her clothes (sorry, I really wrote it wrong U_U). You don't want to annoy her, do you? ^_~"

Can I have her pants?? they are really cool!!!I also like her face! she looks sort of scary, but in a good way!! Great job!

Man she kicks butt!

I see that her hand is a bit too small. Also, where's her ammo for her gun arm?

I usually try to encourage people by focusing on the positive instead of the negative, but I'm going to do a little different this time. Before I do that, though, this is a great pic in both design & colors...nice job!

Okay now, the right arm & "gun" doesn't look exactly right. Like it doesn't fit just perfectly. I agree with an above comment that her left hand seems slightly too small. The metal on the face lloks great, but the piece on her left side looks forced. Maybe if you had some "fake flesh" hanging over the plate to look like it's torn away or something, or maybe an "odder" shaped piece of metal (anything but squareish) would look better. I figure you were going for sexy, but the unfastened belt & pants just doesn't look right to me. Kinda of sloppy & too much of a chance getting it caught in battle or used against her. Is that how she got that metal in her side?

I hope I wasn't too severe. I usually don't do that, but a few modifications would put this pic over the top!