| 24 May 2005 |  Valarie “FaerieLight“ Connell | I think it is a neat picture. Would love to see it in color. The only real thing I can see that is a little off is the size of her face versus the rest of her body. To me her face seems to thin. Granted this is my opinion and hope I didn't hurt your feelings. Other then that it is a nice picture. | |
| 18 Oct 2005 |  Edmond Barrett | Good but she seems a bit stretched out and her right hand looks like the thumb has ended up on the wrong side of the hand. I think what has happen there is you have put too wide a gap been the third and last finger. Over all the face is the strong point but the proportions are off.
Hope that comes across as constructive criticism sorry if it doesn't. | |
| 23 Oct 2005 |  Shara Lynn Krans | The pinky on the right hand looks a bit out of place. overall its a very nice peice of line art. (hands are teh devil) keep up the good work | |
| 2 Nov 2005 |  Athena Leonti | This lass has some attitude! I like it! Wanna see it coloured though! Great linework  | |
| 24 Nov 2005 |  Nelleke Pieters | I love her face!! And her hair looks awesome... got any tips? Because I really s*ck in making hair *^-^* | |
| 18 Jun 2006 |  Cynthia “Arthemis“ Smit | I think this picture isn't 'stretched out'. I think we are looking at a tall woman. Her face is absolutely gorgeous! Although drawn with a comical style, her face seems realistic! That is something absolutely great if you can manage that! I love the way you draw clothes. Only thing that is (only) slightly off is the beer. I would make it a pull with an ear or a bottle (or make the it bigger). | |
| 31 Dec 2006 |  M. Bram | Sweet! I really like it. you can see her personality shining through with just those few lines. I have problems putting emotion or even life in to my characters. As far as crit goes...proportion wise, i think her hips may be a little too narrow. Then again, that is just based on the average, body types vary.
this would be great in color. keep up the great work. ^^ | |
| 19 Aug 2007 |  David Michael | Pretty good, though I think her neck and head look a bit too thin.   Aida Vicens replies: "It may be so... Thank you for pointing it out!" | |
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