| 7 Feb 2004 | Katelyn ((Kiki)) Kikenstein | I love the expression and the pose, great job on both! O yeah, first comment wiggle!  John Niklasson replies: "Thank you Kiki " | |
| 8 Feb 2004 | Lia Angelene Tomco | Oooh the expression is cool, but I luff the sword...  John Niklasson replies: "You do? Great I didn't really like it. Thank you very much." | |
| 10 Feb 2004 | Sarah 'The Crazed Kimchi' Hyland | I love the shading, it's so smooth. Her hand seems a tad small, but i might be wrong. i'm not to good on hand sizes. I love her hairstyle as well. She looks like she's some sort of gaurd. Maybe for a forest village?  John Niklasson replies: "Thank you Maybe she is a guard... *thinkin'* I'll change that once I get my ticket done " | |
| 11 Feb 2004 | Lori Leaumont | Yeah, that's my problem too, I have a very short attention span. Just can't work on one thing for too long. She looks sort of feral and glaring, maybe even slightly wild, like she should be peering out from jungle or forest foliage. I can't think of a name for her, I'm bad at that, but I imagine she's a guardian or watchman, and she's staring down someone, ready to strike as soon as they move one step closer. Kinda predatory, you know?  John Niklasson replies: "Aha, the story is getting vlearer in my mind Thank you again for commenting." | |
| 13 Feb 2004 | Meauw | oh and i forgot, that the temples name is Gandgi, becuse it was a tribe over thousends years ago that have a leader with the name GAndi, And evryone in this tribe was a magican creature. So they did this huge temple whit the power of earth (with magic) so the Gandgi temple is also called "the temple of Earth" ^^ *proud of the short story i made up for ya*  John Niklasson replies: "Hehe, I think I'll put it all thougheter into a story of some kind Cool thing this storymaking stuff. Maybe I'll do it with more of my pictures ^_^;" | |
| 13 Feb 2004 | Meauw | her name could be Mori, maybe.. or somthing that begins with an M. she is the uh.. uh.. "gandi Guard" Gandi is an huge temple, hidden in the dangerouss forest: Tiren. And... and.. one day she got a letter from her mom, that her dad was very sick. So now, she want´s to go home, but she can´t`cuse She´s the only guard, that could guard the Temple of Earth. uhm... uhm.. yes.. and that´s the beginning of a "fantastic" story, for this character. eh what do ya think ? and about the pic : I like it ^^  John Niklasson replies: "Thank you" | |
| 21 Mar 2004 | Jenny Buckle | I really love the shading. I'm hopeless with shading. It always looks really scratchy and dark.  Oh well. Great job!  John Niklasson replies: "Thank you. I'm glad you think so." | |
| 14 Apr 2004 | Myra Sloan | What a pose. Very exciting. It seems her eyebrow on the left should be touching her nose if the right one is. i love her facial expression. Good art  John Niklasson replies: "Thanks, yeah, maybe your right about that..." | |