| 5 Jul 2000 |  Jill | I like the way that you did the sun light through the tree it's one of my favorite things too. the figure is a little sybolic though and I think this might look really good if you left the background black and white(with a little more detail) and did the sun rays in color. | |
| 14 May 2001 | Lea | àðé øåöä ìäæäéø àåúê ìôðé àðé îîù ìà èåáä áìá÷ø òáåãä ùì îéùäå àæ ... àðé àäáúé áîéåçã àú äñ÷ö'éí ùìê àðé ìà éåãòú îä ìâáé äôéñåì ëé àðé ìà ëì ëê îðåñä ìâáé æä åàðé ìà çåùáú ùàðé éëåìä ìá÷ø òáåãä îñåâ æä ëé àðé ìà îîù àåäáú ôéñåì. àáì àúä èåá éù ìê àú äéãééí äîúàéîåú (øåàéí) àðé ìà éåãòú àéê àúä òåùä àú æä àáì àéê ùàúä éåöø áúîåðä äæàú àú ääùú÷ôåú ùì äùîù æä ðåøà îéåçã äìååàé ùàðé éëåìúé ìöééø ëëä. àáì îä äàéùä ùùåëáú ùí àðé ôùåè ìà îáéðä ìîä ìà öééøú àåúä éåúø áøåøäéà ìà çùåáä áöéåø? äéà ìà äð÷åãä äîøëæéú? èåá áëì î÷øä æä ðåøà éôä åðçù îä éù ìê ëéùøåï!!!!!!   Ori Sonnenschein replies: "sorry about the hebrew. here is a translation:
"i want to warn you ahead that i am not very good at being a critic . . . i loved your scketch like work i dont know about your sculpture because i dont really like sculptures.
but you are good you have the right kind of hand (it shows) i dont know how you do it but the way you created the reflection of the sun in this drawing is very special, i wish i could draw like that. but the woman thats lying there i just dont get why didn't you draw her more clearly with more detail, is she not important? isn't she the center of the drawing?
anyway this is great and guess what, you got talant!!!!!"
thank you very much, she is important but the sun is the center. " | |
| 17 Aug 2001 | Stavros Tsiakalos | I like the way you did the light a lot. The picture has great depth and I think the pencil came out really well. I am a bit ambivalent about the person though. I both like the simple form and at the same time would like to see something more detailed. | |
| 30 Aug 2002 | Pat O'Connor | Thats a really cool drawing, and that looks like a really hot chick right there. wooo | |
| 8 Mar 2003 |  Heather M. 'Aileen' Heinz | It's very interesting to see this concept piece and then compare it with the original. Thanks for letting us see how it all evolved. | |
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