| 20 Feb 2000 | Jill Johansen | from what I can see, yes the proportions do need work. but I think a lot of it can be fixed by changing your drawing position... I'm *guessing* you draw on a flat table, am i right? What it looks like is that the proportions get steadily bigger as you get up to the head, so I'm thinking you had the drawing on the table infront of you and looking at the drawing at an angle caused you to draw the head bigger, feet smaller to compensate for perspective when looking at it from that angle... I used to do this all the time. So my suggestion would simply to be get an angled drawing surface, or make sure you are picking up your drawing constantly and holding it out at arms length to make sure you're getting it right from a head on view, not jsut layin there on the table. | |
| 2 Jan 2001 | Anon. | im just curious as to why she'd shave her pubes off | |
| 22 Jan 2001 | Brian Edwin Weseman | Technical critique: the hips are off proportion with the shoulders, the legs off proportion with the hips, and the feet are off proportion with the legs. The shading is good, subtle, lends some depth to the figure, and the forms from about shoulder up are nice, in particular her expression. Scrap using photo reference though in favor of getting your hands on a musculature and/or anatomy guide. I thinkthe Photo Reference led you astray... trust in your own abilities instead. | |
| 24 Jan 2002 | Michelle | What about the tail cats have tails | |
| 21 May 2004 | Stormlord | I don't know if had received a comment for your technical style. (sorry, bad English)
when you draw a figure, start with the trunk then add chest and the lower trunk (or so in direction) then add the head. take the size of the head and trunk under the body, thats the lange of the legs. then draw the feet and then the rest of the legs.
so i do it, to avoid an un-proportional body. | |
| 19 Nov 2004 | Queen Meylowin of Emopia | The shins are too thin in comparison to the thighs | |
| 20 Aug 2005 | Animemme | PERV! It's pretty good tho. | |
| 19 Dec 2005 | Damian Marley | You should put a little color to it | |
| 26 Dec 2005 | Loona | Her feet look strange | |