| 6 Aug 1998 | Liz (Z 10 - Loth 38) | I like this one, very peaceful, serene. I would agree with the varying line values - but still the pic is wonderful. | |
| 6 Aug 1998 | Ahati | My only other observation is that you might want to try experimenting with line wieght. The nearer an object the harder you press with the pin hence the darker the line, and the farther away the object the lighter the pressure it recieves and hence a lighter color. In this drawing this technique would give the impression of the ground below the bridge falling away and appearing very distant, whereas now with everything approximately the same "weight" it stands very near together and doesn't appear to have much depth. | |
| 6 Aug 1998 | Ali | Nice and simplistic, good job. It only lacks a sky. | |
| 13 Aug 1998 | Rachel Kaia | Thanks for your comments. I will take them to heart. | |
| 3 Sep 1998 | Michelle G.21 | I always had the impression that Elves were from Ireland..(or just looked that way!) and this really sets it in concrete for me  It looks like what i think would be a fantasy irish countryside, with orcs and the like hiding behind a boulder..(or is that just coz im listening to enya here?..) heh..great pic just for a sketch! i would have scribble marks everywhere, and nothing would look like it was supposed to !! | |
| 24 Nov 1999 | Dorota K. Gronkiewicz | A very nice picture.. You are very talented, Rachel! | |