| 31 Oct 2000 | Cameron O. Niebuhr | other than ^that it perfect  | |
| 31 Oct 2000 | Janice A. Swogger | I like the overall impression, but her ribcage is absolutely massive. It kinda looks like she's wearing a fake chest over her own. With a body that slender, her upper body should match. Artist::Well the ribcage is acually supposed to look like that, it'd half anime style and her position doesn't help for the realissm. As far as i lnew i did it quite well, i thought that the proportions are acually quite good. O use my own body as a model, i went in the bathroom, arched my back, put up my arms in the same position, i inhaled deeply and studied my position, i exaggerated a lil and this is the result. But thank you for commenting | |
| 29 Jul 2001 | D.V. | The ribcage seems large, while the waist and hips taper down too far. The suggestion of a pelvis should be evident in the hips, especially in a woman this thin. | |