Hey there Shawn, neat stuff you've got here. You really should try photoshop (or any other coloring program) a lot more, it'd make your pictures even better than they already are. But I know that constructive criticism always helps (although I'm terribly at giving criticism), so here goes: try to work on your body proportions. (Here in elfwood, in FARP, you can find a lot of great tips!!!! They worked for me, too)

Hey gorgeous,(I finally found this page *L*) glad to see you have put your creativeness to work. Continue to work on the book, what I have read so far is great, I am sure the pics will be an added bonus. Keep workin Bainster!!

UR GREAT -<SMILES>- =^..^=

hay, Mr. Shawn M. Campbell...haha; not laguhing at just at the world... how are you doing?,fine Im sure, loved you mom's message...well let me get on with it, read this poem and afterwords please leave me a message on your borad and i'll pick it up,thanks you will be somebody one day,trust your enter fellings.

Touchier is only a word that says pain,Her eyes of unfulfilled lust and passion curves like a canvas body that explin my extancene,who am I to dwell onyour lustful appetie of worldy pains,shimmer of those lasting green hazel eyes...OH, Mr.Campbell if you don"T LIKE IT PLEASE PASS IT ON...IM SURE THEY WOULD DO THE SAME THING FOR u.
THANKS <:-$>



get back with me ASP good luck on your work and let me know if I have a chance.

hay, Mr. Shawn M. Campbell...haha; not laguhing at just at the world... how are you doing?,fine Im sure, loved you mom's message...well let me get on with it, read this poem and afterwords please leave me a message on your borad and i'll pick it up,thanks you will be somebody one day,trust your enter fellings.

Touchier is only a word that says pain,Her eyes of unfulfilled lust and passion curves like a canvas body that explin my extancene,who am I to dwell onyour lustful appetie of worldy pains,shimmer of those lasting green hazel eyes...OH, Mr.Campbell if you don"T LIKE IT PLEASE PASS IT ON...IM SURE THEY WOULD DO THE SAME THING FOR u.
THANKS U



get back with me ASP good luck on your work and let me know if I have a chance.

hay, Mr. Shawn M. Campbell...haha how are you doing,fine Im sure loved you mom's message...well let me get on with it read this poem and afterwords leave me a message on your borad and i'll pick it up,thank you

Touchier is only a word that says pain,Her eyesof unfulfilled lust and passion curves like a canvas body that explin my extancene,who am I to dwell onyour lustful appetie of worldy pains,shimmer of those lasting green hazel eyes...OH, Mr.Campbell if you don"T LIKE IT PLEASE PASS IT ON IM SURE THEY WOULD DO THE SAME THING,THANK U



get back with me ASP good lick on your work let me know if I have a chance.

hay, Mr. Shawn M. Campbell...haha how are you doing,fine Im sure loved you mom's message...well let me get on with it read this poem and afterwords leave me a message on your borad and i'll pick it up,thank you

Touchier is only a word that says pain,Her eyesof unfulfilled lust and passion curves like a canvas body that explin my extancene,who am I to dwell onyour lustful appetie of worldy pains,shimmer of those lasting green hazel eyes.



get back with me ASP good lick on your work let me know if I have a chance.

Hi! You're writing a novel, good for you, if it's as good as your drawings I'd love to read it, when you're finished of course!

Annonamus. I loved the poem indeed. I am sorry for the wait in my reply. I have been away.

hey you live in standish? poor you i lived there too, but i came back to my home in cali. i love your art. do you know the McClains there in bentley? email me if you do.