| 9 Feb 2001 |  Arwen | she neds color to give her more emphasis. she looks great though. | |
| 18 Apr 2001 |  Julie R. Kowalski | This is an excellent sketch....you have a great hand for pencil...this pose really caught my eye....maybe because I draw many human forms and she's kind of in a fetile typed position but, also there's much emotion and I love that....I too would love to see you finish this....not that it's not good as is....but maybe color it....without losing the lines or feeling....let me know if you ever do,k? | |
| 18 May 2001 |  Nathan Neil Phillips | I think it could stay black and white, but it needs stark blacks and sharp lines. | |
| 26 May 2001 | Jen R. DeFord | I agree that she needs either color or higher contrast for emphasis. I like the look on her face; it conveys her emotions (i.e. waiting for something she doesn't want) very well. Why isn't her last name the same as her father's? Her father wasn't in her life very much, and she was raised by her mother. Since she doesn't like Gilferen, she refuses to take the name of him, and goes under her mothers name. | |
| 11 Aug 2001 | Aquial | I love the story you've put with her, and the fact that she doesn't take her father's name. I think the black and white shows very well that she doesn't like her father, I don't care either way, but if you were to color it, I would say to make sure you use darker colors, and completely stay away from the brights. And also make sure her expression stays as it is. Very lovely. | |
| 22 Dec 2002 |  S. Hudson | hmm... I think black and white very heavily contrasted with heavy shadowing... maybe one color added to something... | |
| 19 Mar 2003 | Samael | Oh, she does not look happy. ^_^ The pose is nice, fitting with her seat, although it then makes me wonder that the window seems a little low on that wall. But oh well! | |
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