| 18 Oct 1999 | | i LOVE her face. you are definately improving. | |
| 26 Jul 2001 | Allison Amber Bray | Nice pic overall, the expression on the face is priceless. The one thing that REALLY struck me was her chest, because her breasts are very pushed up and centered, providing the obvious cleavage, but her shirt is so loose that I doubt that it's humanly possibly to be that perky *wink*. I would suggest, instead of using the curved lines in the center of her chest, to suggest the curves by using pull lines and wrinkles in the fabric. In other words, using two or three lines that are more vertical/diagonal, and maybe two or three horizontal lines between the breasts, would suggest that even though the shirt is still loose, her chest is pulling the fabric taut in some places, which would look more natural. I dunno, basic clothing drawing 101 I guess *wink*. Great job, I look forward to seeing some more of your work. | |
| 9 Mar 2002 | Anonymous <ROBOHOME@HOT...C | You are a winner ! You win a paper bag!... Why? , you ask ?! Well it so you can draw your way out of it!!! | |
| 9 Mar 2002 | Kimiko Satsuki <anim | Alright, here's another suggestion for you... you may want to study the human figure for a while... this character is cute, almost chibi-ish, but not quite. The neck is a little long as well. If you're going for the chibi-look, there are plenty of great websites that can give you some references. | |
| 9 Mar 2002 | Jenni H. Väisänen | I just had to comment  It's great you still keep drawing, even if all your drawings aren't as good as some pictures in the woods. Don't care too much about what some people say. You are improving all the time. Keep it up! | |
| 10 Mar 2002 | Anonymous | OBO stfu! ur so harsh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! | |