| 2 Jan 2000 | Colleen T. O'Rourke | I like this one the best, because of the simple detail lines on the neck and shoulder. The shape of the head is good too. It would be even cooler colored; you could do some really nifty and colorful patterns and stuff.  | |
| 29 Jan 2000 | Serena J. Loder | I can defenitely see improvement here! The unicorn's neck is better than in the first, it is more realistic. Great job! | |
| 20 Aug 2000 | stormmaker | erm the kneck is kewl but the neck/head is still out of proportion to the body, just stick with it and you'll get there. | |
| 20 Aug 2000 | Anon. | erm the kneck is kewl but the neck/head is still out of proportion to the body, just stick with it and you'll get there. | |
| 15 Apr 2003 | Scott | Hey alot better looks great Keep it up. | |
| 11 Jun 2003 | Maria | This is EXCELLENT for a second try, wow! I think its beautiful, and just keep doing what you love doing! | |
| 11 Oct 2003 | Anonymous | For a second try this is awesome .Ive been drawing for about 11 years now and unicorns are one of my favortie creatures and i still dont think i draw them right. keep practicing i think youll do great!!! | |
| 9 Apr 2004 | Ashlynn | Hey it looks good now all u need to do is start shadin and maybe even add a simple background and wulah!! U have a beautiful picture of a unicorn!! Its already beautiful but im just sayin it would make it more beautiful.. <3 i hope i helped! Laterz... | |