FanArt: Jedi Pair falling

Nice... But Phantom simply MUST critique... or he would explode you understand... Uuhh... there's only two things, one biggy one litty. The arm, previously mentioned many a time, so I'll say no more of it... and their pose... that's what it looks like; a pose. The Jedi would've duck-rolled into the hole, and thus be on their side or back or somethin'. Once again, excellent pic.

With my poses and your art, we could go far Kidding, yet again of course, you should know that by now!

The hair is very nice, you captured the air flowage about it very nicely. Along with the clothing flowage. Don't listen to the person who called you a sexist. They wish they had a man that would so willingly protect them like that. They're just jealous. I love the damage marks on them, very nice. Hey... hehe, I just thought, it could almost be that she was falling, and he's flying upward and cought her lol. And their clothing is very nice also, too bad it got rips in it... Alright then, 'nough outta this white guy. KEEP IT UP! Make some money off of your work, forilley, if you haven't already.

Looks ravishing! I saw your other one like this and I thought maybe you should draw one of you eating your boyfriends pear (like in the movie) and him trying to get it back....Silly suggestion but i think itd be cute.

Just a little tip on how to fix the arm: her hand should be at the left side of his waist, not next to her right arm (directions based on the way they are facing). The reason the arm looks weird is becuase its too long, and she should be grasping at the guys clothes, so that she doesn't slip out of his grasp. other than that its great.

wow, this is good
They kinda look like either harry/ginny or james/lily
i like!

awesome pic!!
i don't think this picture is sexist, i'm sure she's just doing that to hold on to him, yah? ;P

Besides, this is a female artist, so it's not like she can be really antifemales -- come on, she is one! Chella probably would do that if that situation ever occured, and she is accurately portraying what type of reactions she and her boyfreind would have!

so no, this is not sexist, it is very good!

You've hear enough about the right arm now let's talk about the left. She kinda looks like there's a tumor in her arm. Connect the two parts of the arm more. Make it a curving line more than a bump. Do you know what I mean? And the guy kinda remindes me of superman. *giggles* It's fun being crazy. toodles!

Poor me, I look at it and go "Lily and James?!" and then I read your description. Helas, my prediction was false...

Again another perfect picture!XD

Wow! great! although her right arm is kinda long ya have it clutching his waist! i agree with snowflake! Otherwise great job Oh and i like the glasses jedi look your boyfriend has the jedi look!

hello harry! what happened to your wand and scar?.... just joking, nice pic.